What do you think of this characters description?

Do you mean abandoned? I know you know that you made tons of grammatical mistakes, so don't take this as slapping you in the face with a spell-checker, but I merely asked what you meant by that word because I didn't know which word you meant. Enough rambling, sorry, and back to the description. I think it is good. It might need some work to sound a little bit un-amateur, but otherwise I like the character. She seems very sweet.